#NaPoWriMo day 29

It is the penultimate day of NaPoWriMo! It’s almost over, but not yet so no emotional farewells as of yet. Let’s get into today’s musically inspired piece, free doughnut for the (first) person who can tell me what song the piece is inspired by. With that in mind enjoy…

Blue Places

When the blessing takes to long
that’s when you go wrong.

Do you smile in blue places?
All teeth, mouth open
no more resistance
the eviction of air successful.

Do you extradite smiles
so that inside, there are no blue places?
No salt water saturating cells with death.

That frown means you don’t breathe drowning,
it is still an oxygen killer.

Dead of brain,
waiting for blessing
when the blessing is waiting.


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